When I work with Paint I am reminded that I love to paint.I begin a piece by thinking a lot about what I want out of that particular piece. I know a piece is done when I feel it has good quality and shows thought. When my work is going well, I am filled with a sense of satisfaction.When people see my work I'd like them to give good constructive feed back I can learn from.
you do not need to capitalize the word paint...
ReplyDeletework with paint b/c you love to paint? You can/need to reword this sentence.
What you want out of a piece? concept? colors? composition? abstract. A sentence is needed for clarification.
The last sentence...what sort of feedback and how are they suppose to give it to you?
A good start.